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I have found myself somewhat careless
the way my mind softly whispers your name
how I now have to struggle to hold you in
my clenched teeth, your prison sentence

Failing, my mind conjures up false delusions
your presence, your brow furrowed in thought
your eyes testing my wit, jaw taught with want
for these precious moments of mine, you exist

Standing just steps from me, still unreachable
my own personal torture, yet I revel in it willingly
the distance between us, my unyielding bonds
feet glued to where they now tremble, my lashing

Such a silly mess, to fear one's own creation
my heart screaming your name in frantic beats
watery eyes fasten shut, until alone once more
though the spirit that is you still flows within me
"I think I might have inhaled you
I can feel you behind my eyes
You’ve gotten into my bloodstream
I can feel you flowing in me"



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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
CAN YOU help me please? with the author tag thing ?
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Bitumz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure, I had some trouble with it too.
How can I be of assistance?
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
I have mine saved to my computer but i cant get it on my Da account
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Bitumz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Give me a sec and I'll note you.
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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Dungbar Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
a very tragic perspective. the pain we feel for others is always much more valuable than that which we feel for ourselves.
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Bitumz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very true, friend.
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. :heart:
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TheLionAndTheFish Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
This is sad, but beautiful! Recognizable, too. I hope you did fell asleep after writing this:)
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Bitumz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :hug:

Sleep still fails me (it's nearly 5am here) but it's all good :P
Thank you for the thought though :)
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TheLionAndTheFish Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
You're welcome! :huggle:
Yeesh, 5am?! It's nearly 12pm here, weird isn't it?;)

I hope you'll have a good day:)
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